A flickering dun light suffused the nighttime greenhouse dome.
City of Garden
Overworking murder -> Sabbath
January 13th (day 1) Wednesday
January 14th (day 2) Thursday
January 15th (day 3) Friday
January 16th (day 4) Saturday
January 17th (day 5) Sunday
January 18th (day 6) Monday
January 19th (day 7) Tuesday --> Thursday on rewind
Dressed in spandex-polycotton shorts and underarmor tops, they were addressing the needs of the agricultural and animal populations, late into the night. It was their weekend, and they were not at home with their kids. Not officially married, though they've been together many years (children, house). Woman works with agriculture, man with animals.
Raven hair perfectly coifed. Tall, muscular, lean, with clean-shaven face. Both undressed, coverings scattered about and torn. "Always said working would be the death of them."
Murdered on the job. How? How broadcasted? --> next steps
I like the tone. The spareness adds a little bit of edgy mystery to the reading.
ReplyDeleteThe name of Garden is good. Really goes well w/ the theme as well as the smaller feel, parlour murder mystery I am seeing in my head.